Dear Readers
I have devoted a lot of my free-time to this story. When I first picked up on it about two and a half years ago I saw a lot of things that I was personally dissatisfied with; while other things intrigued me. My younger self started this story with good intentions but I have somewhat better intentions. If you have already read through this story once you know it has/had many imperfections, plenty of spelling and grammar mistakes. The story had some parts that felt rushed and others that I felt were too immature. Let's just say after several months, multiple notebooks, and a playlist of inspirational music I have given this story a complete makeover.
As this note has been posted the story will officially have eleven chapters posted and the remaining two chapters in the works. I have kept a lot of my original scenes. I have just more depth and detail riddled throughout it. I have earnestly tried to embody these characters as much as possible. This is of course my own three year gap interpretation, I try to stay true to most of the original timeline but this is a cannon divergent story. Definitely give this story another read, pacing has been fixed and there is some new stuff in here of course. I have a better writing set-up and I have had my proof-reader go through all chapters so it should be a smooth read. Thank you to all of you who have already read the story and thank you to all who will give this story another try.
*Note for Trunks' Birthday
I know if you look it up it says Trunks is born in Nov of 766, if this was true this means he is walking by six months, now I know he is half saiyan but come-on that's ridiculously fast. I figured a June Trunks makes baby Trunks almost one when the androids arrive meaning walking is still early for a normal human but in the animation baby Trunk's is babbling, having small fits, and clearly understands facial expressions.
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Count Down From Ten
FanfictionAfter the mysterious boy had come to warn everybody about the androids Bulma invited Vegeta to stay and train at Capsule Corps. Vegeta accepted the offer and began his training instantly. What he didn't know was that he was about to face the biggest...