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BEST MALE LEAD RESULTS

Judge
Rahaf Eliwa

It took too long😪

Boba Awards

Ancilla
Death and complexity of the character:10%

Development and growth throughout the story:8%

Believability and reliability of emotions:7%

Memorable traits or quality:  6%

Impact of the overall narrator:5%

Judge personal opintion: 2%

I do like the writing style and the choice of words is so specific, though the story lacks one of the main things which is THE HOOK, and the way the information is delivered through simply talking. We authors have to use it surely but to prevent the story from being boring it's better to deliver information through dialogue and moments when you remember things. Good luck
Overall: 38%

Dare
Death and complexity of the character:4%

Development and growth throughout the story:8%

Believability and reliability of emotions:6%

Impact of the overall narrator:4%

Memorable traits or quality:3%

Judge personal opintion:7%

A five live honest review

I like how the emotions are described, the choice of words is really good. The emotions are written fabulously. Though the speed of the plot is quit rushed, how Jane fell quickly for matheo was somehow unbelievable. However, we all learn and I can see how the writing style improves ever chapter. I advise you worsk on the show not tell techniques. Good luck.

All overall:39%

Artemisia Devotion
Death and complexity of the character:7%

Development and growth throughout the story:7%

Believability and reliability of emotions:5%

Impact of the overall narrator:4%

Memorable traits or quality:5%

Judge personal opintion:7%

A five live honest review
Firstly, the flashbacks are in the right time and are linked precisely to the future which is really good, but the dialogue lacks emotion deeply that sometimes it feels empty. Though I really like how the characters are planned and described specially Artemis, I also like the speed of the plot but adding more emotions would make it even better. Good luck.

All over:35%

You have no idea
Death and complexity of the character:9%

Development and growth throughout the story:10%

Believability and reliability of emotions:8%

Impact of the overall narrator:4%

Memorable traits or quality:5%

Judge personal opintion: 10%
So good, I really, liked the characters and the speed of the plot is so appropriate. The chemistry between the characters is amazing. I also like the improvements as we go along the story. I've seen one or two grammar mistakes and you should probably avoid using chatty language like ASAP . I really enjoyed the story.
Overall:46%

Love on duty
Death and complexity of the character:7%

Development and growth throughout the story:8%

Believability and reliability of emotions:6%

Impact of the overall narrator:4%

Memorable traits or quality:3%

Judge personal opintion:6%

I advise you to try and improve the show not tell techniques as to make the reader more engaged and the scene mire realistic. Try to add emotions and body language for the readers to have a clearer picture of what's going on. I really like the story idea and the scenes chosen, I can also see improvements as the story proceeds. Good luck.

Overall:35%

Dude, I kissed your mom
Death and complexity of the character:10%

Development and growth throughout the story:10%

Believability and reliability of emotions:9%

Impact of the overall narrator:4%

Memorable traits or quality:5%

Judge personal opintion:10%

It's so good, I really like how well planned the characters are. I also like how the scenes are not silly and are rather interesting and engaging, though I advise you to change the book cover as I don't feel it fits the story much. However, we should never really judge a book by its cover so other than that it's Perfect. Good luck.

Over all:48%

A dangerous game of submission
Death and complexity of the character:7%

Development and growth throughout the story:8%

Believability and reliability of emotions:6%

Impact of the overall narrator:4%

Memorable traits or quality:3%

Judge personal opintion:8%
I like the story idea and how creative it is but the information and Worldbuilding is delivered through talking instead of showing, which is somehow unengaging.the choice of words is great, but using synonyms instead of using the same words is better. Good luck.
Overall:36%

Hard to love, hard to ĺose
Death and complexity of the character:8%

Development and growth throughout the story:8%

Believability and reliability of emotions:6%

Impact of the overall narrator:5%

Memorable traits or quality:5%

Judge personal opintion:8%

The story hold a great idea, I like the charecters and the unseen suspense between the lines. However, there is a large part of the story which is told not showed especially in the beginning which makes the story feels empty and rushed. So I advise you to use more show not tell methods using the body gestures. There is also some grammar mistakes which can give a bad impression. Though I feel like the author is improving as we proceed in the story which is the most important thing. Good luck.
Overall:40%

Infinite
Death and complexity of the character:9%

Development and growth throughout the story:9%

Believability and reliability of emotions:7%

Impact of the overall narrator:4%

Memorable traits or quality:5%

Judge personal opintion:9%
I'm in love with the Worldbuilding, the story and writing style is also great. Though I advise you to decrease the style of telling the story and instead try showing the story by body language and gestures. There was also some minor grammar mistakes which are totally fine and common. I think you should try focusing on the paragraph breaks. Good luck.