BEST PLOT TWIST RESULTS

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JUDGING RESULTS BEST BLURB AND CONTENT.
@Onyi8Obi
THE DRAGON GUARDIAN.

SO...the blurb judging criteria is kinda different.
I did them in (tens) and (fifties) just Incase.

Total=7(ten)
           37(fifties)
Review....

@yariso52018
EMBERS OF MIRAGE

Total=6(tens)
           33(fifties)
Review.....

@aurora-2604
ROMANTIC STORY.

Total= 9(tens)
            46(fifties)
Review......

@SerenNightWildMoon7.
DESTINED BY LOVE.

Total=5(tens)
           29(fifties)
Review.......

@Etaereal3012
  ECHOES OF EUPHORIA.

Total=7(tens)
           38(fifties)
Review........

Harshywrites05
ARTEMIS'S DEVOTION.

Total=8(tens)
           42(fifties)
Review.....
  
@Evolution-500
FOOTSTEPS APPROACHING.

Total=6(tens)
           32(fifties).
Review.....

@Kazeleeknow
  AWAKENING; UNLEASHING THE MAGIC WITHIN.
    
Total=7(tens)
           39(fifties)
Reviews........

BEST CONTENT

@kazeleeknow

AWAKENING; UNLEASHING THE MAGIC WITHIN.
Character-8
Story growth-7
Emotional believability-7
Impact-9
Personal opinion- 8
Review.....
  Too open and revealing. It should be as much revealing as mysterious.
  The grammar....was kinda plain. You should improve there as well. There in all, it's good....
Total=39

@TaeTaeGinger

LOVE BEYOND THE STAGE LIGHT.
Character-8
Story growth-8
Emotional believability-8
Impact-10
Personal opinion-10
Review.......
  It was very well written and the grammar..... spectacular!.
  As similar though, you need to be more open on your dialect and words.
It should be formal and informal to be with. ..
You did good!....
Total=44
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JUDGING RESULTS BEST PLOT TWIST.
@ihskasii_u
SPERM ON DEMAND.
Depth and complexity of the character- 9
Development and growth throughout the story- 7
Believability and reliability of Emotion-8
Impact on the narrator-4
Memorable traits or qualities-5
Personal opinion-8
Total = 41

Review—
The story felt a bit rushed.
The emotions were pretty good though, It's depth and placement was just alright.
It explained in details, the characters horizon and a bit on the thoughts too.
This is good.....

@yaris052018
METAMORPHOSIS;
      EMBERS OF MIRAGE
Depth and complexity of the character-10
Development and growth throughout the story-10
Believability and reliability of Emotion-8
Impact on the narrator-3
Memorable traits or qualities-5
Personal opinion-7
Total=43
Review—
It is really good. The writing, the grammar, the language and the character is just the perfect literature.
Splendid!

@avniy1312
TRAPPED IN A MYSTIFYING FICTIONAL WORLD.
Depth and complexity of the character- 8
Development and growth throughout the story-7
Believability and reliability of Emotion-6
Impact on the narrator-2
Memorable traits or qualities-3
Personal opinion-7
Total=33

Review—
This was.... captivating!.
The originality and unique idea is very impressive.
This is the first thriller reincarnated novel I've read.
Very good!.
The writing style is entrancing, as well as the plot.
Now, it is interesting.
But, it is pretty rushed.
There wasn't really any emotional depth, or plotting gap for the characters.
It felt somewhat incomplete.....
Either way, it is a good story. Very good!.
Though, I'd advice you to try better.

@Yoonkeeri
A DANGEROUS GAME OF SUBMISSION.

Depth and complexity of the character- 9
Development and growth throughout the story-10
Believability and reliability of Emotions-9
Impact on the narrator-5
Memorable traits or qualities-4
Personal opinion-9
Total=46

Review—
This is very good story. It's compelling and interesting.
The unexpected turnouts and twist is so original, even for a fanfiction.
Truly Impressive!.

@Ennyrogers
QUEENLY QUEST.
Depth and complexity of the character- 10
Development and growth throughout the story- 9
Believability and reliability of Emotions-10
Impact on the narrator-5
Memorable traits or qualities-5
Personal opinion-9
Total=48

Review—
It's intriguing, compelling and interesting.
I'd say, this is a very good piece. The grammar is mild and friendly, and the pace is quite alright.
Impressive work!.

@Shaunniz
SO LET ME TELL YOU WHAT HAPPENED
Depth and complexity of the character-9
Development and growth throughout the story-8
Believability and reliability of Emotions-8
Impact on the narrator-3
Memorable traits or qualities-5
Personal opinion-8
Total= 41

Review—
This was.... insisting.
I specifically liked her undeniable character, and the world depth is quite the description.
GREAT WORK!.

@DancingRavenclaw99
STAR CROSSED LOVERS.
Depth and complexity of the character-6
Development and growth throughout the story-4
Believability and reliability of Emotions-4
Impact on the narrator-2
Memorable traits or qualities-2
Personal opinion-4
Total= 22

Review—
This is a drama based and, it is so confusing, especially to those who are not die-hard Harry Potter fans. The emotions are barely portrayed, the characters are indecisive and the story's depth and pace in all is just inaffable. You need more work.

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