Bulletproof Artistry Awards [Closed]

𝐌𝐘𝐒𝐓𝐄𝐑𝐘-𝐓𝐇𝐑𝐈𝐋𝐋𝐄𝐑 - 𝐏𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐜𝐢𝐩𝐚𝐧𝐭𝐬' 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰

 𝐏𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐜𝐢𝐩𝐚𝐧𝐭𝐬' 𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰

Book: The Destiny's Game

Author: @SeoulmateYURA

Judge: @Hells07dealer7

Score: 37/80

Title: 5/5

The title is interesting, and it does not match entirely to the plot, but it does fit the relationship of the leads. Their meeting was truly a Destiny's game.

Cover: 0.5/5

The cover is not exactly a cover, first of all, there is not even a title placed, and only a picture is there. The cover has no blurb or author name. Also, the picture is not clear enough. I would suggest you order a cover from a graphic shop or make a cover yourself if you can, it is your choice though.

Blurb: 2.5/5

The description is good and interesting. The length is also perfect, and it gives a good number of spoilers. But there are a few grammatical mistakes, and missing punctuation marks. I would advise you to either use a grammar-correcting app or you can copy-paste the description into Google Docs which will underline the errors, and you can correct them with the help of suggestions.

Plot: 10/15

The plot of the story is okay, it's a unique plot and not very common but it is not structured well. The plot is very unstable. I would advise you to either write the chapter in script form so that the plot has better development or write in the format of 50% dialogues and 50% scripts. I guess you are new to writing because in the beginning I also used to write like this only, but don't worry I am sure with little changes you will develop your writing skills and stories.

Characters: 1/5

The characters are not introduced well. I know you want to keep things mysterious but maybe you should explain the characters well. Firstly, give a brief introduction of Taehyung, if you are going to use Taehyung for dialogue then use that name in the description and introduction, not V. Also, you have written it is a Vsoo ff, but the main female lead is named here Nabi which doesn't make the story Vsoo ff instead it is a TaehyungxReader ff. If you are using idols' names, you have to make sure that only the names are used, even if you want to give them a nickname. The letter can have Nabi as a nickname but while writing the main plot and introduction, you should use Jisoo.