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𝓣𝓲𝓶𝓮 𝓽𝓸 𝓾𝓷𝓿𝓮𝓲𝓵 𝓽𝓱𝓮 𝔀𝓲𝓷𝓷𝓮𝓻 !!
𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐖𝐈𝐍𝐍𝐄𝐑
Book: Contract Love
Author: @Dramauwu
Judge: @LAJoyner
Score: 29.4/30
Grammar and Punctuation: 5/5
*Two thumbs up*
Engagement and Hook: 4.9/5
A short and to the point hook just needs one little thing...
Character Introduction: 4.5/5
Taehyung's intro is fine; just add a little about Eunji.
Tone and Atmosphere: 5/5
Sometimes less is more as they say, and this blurb may have fewer words than most but you get everything you need as a great hook.
Plot Significance: 5/5
it may be a short blurb but after adding Eunji's introduction it would be a perfect intro to the plot.
Originality and Creativity: 5/5
Short and precise, relying on enough information to pull a reader in.
TOTAL: 29.4/30
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𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐑𝐔𝐍𝐍𝐄𝐑 𝐔𝐏
Book: Art Of a Bleeding Heart
Author: @strawberry1d
Judge: @LAJoyner
Score: 29/30
Grammar and Punctuation: 4/5
He has an active moving gaze and in the same sentence it is stationary. The word within should be with, unless you are meaning she is seeing sadness within the art work itself. If so, then it needs a little clarification that either its makes her sad or she sees sadness portrayed in the art. There is an extra space after: 'heart ,after he suffered' the comma needs to be moved.
Engagement and Hook: 5/5
the blurb gives a good hook to catch a reader drawing them in.
Character Introduction: 5/5
The introduction of the characters is well done.
Tone and Atmosphere: 5/5
The blurb sets the tone and mood of the story
Plot Significance: 5/5
The blurb effectively conveys the plot
Originality and Creativity: 5/5
TOTAL: 29/30
Rearranging some wording for clarity and better flow (just a suggestion):His gaze wanders toward the beautiful, serene figure of a woman, who looks with sadness at the exquisite art in his exhibition "Art of a Bleeding Heart' causing his senses to flood with nostalgia.
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𝓒𝓞𝓝𝓖𝓡𝓐𝓣𝓤𝓛𝓐𝓣𝓘𝓞𝓝𝓢!
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