𝐁𝐄𝐒𝐓 𝐏𝐑𝐎𝐋𝐎𝐆𝐔𝐄 - 𝐏𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐜𝐢𝐩𝐚𝐧𝐭𝐬' 𝐒𝐜𝐨𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐡𝐞𝐞𝐭

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𝐏𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐜𝐢𝐩𝐚𝐧𝐭𝐬' 𝐒𝐜𝐨𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐡𝐞𝐞𝐭

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𝐏𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐜𝐢𝐩𝐚𝐧𝐭𝐬' 𝐒𝐜𝐨𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐡𝐞𝐞𝐭


Book: The Snowman

Author: @BANGTANHOLIC_FICS

Judge: @Hells07dealer

Score: 23/30



Grammar and Punctuation: 5/5

The prologue has no grammatical or punctuation errors. Though the prologue is not descriptive, the narration is still appreciable.

Engagement and Hook: 3.5/5

The prologue is engaging, but not engaging enough to completely get you hooked. Maybe you can try to enhance the presentation of the prologue. Though the way it is written, it conveys the feelings so purely and in a raw manner.

Character Introduction: 4/5

The prologue didn't really give away the characters straight away, but at the same time, without even using names, the prologue has given a significant amount of introduction about the characters' relationship and individuality.

Tone and Atmosphere: 5/5

The tone and atmosphere were very well conveyed through the words. The narration has really touched my heart. The story, though having a common plot, still evokes feelings in your heart.

Plot Significance: 3.5/5

The prologue is important for the plot; however, it has given away the whole main plot already through a few lines. It would have been good to some extent, but revealing the whole plot has spoiled the story a little.

Originality and Creativity: 2/5

The story is creative, but I am not sure about originality. The plot didn't show me anything different, which is why. This plot, as you must have known, is one of the very common ones.

Total: 23/30


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Book: Broken Petal

Author: @Queenfanfriction2010

Judge: @Hells07dealer

Score: 18/30

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