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Guardian Angel Assignment: Kim Namjoon

Author: @LAJoyner

Judge: @k00kiesandch0c0lates

Score: 73/80

Title: 5/5

The title is perfect. Nothing more, nothing less. It is unique and reflects the plot well. To be honest, I really love it.

Cover: 3/5

The picture of the cover is okay but could use something better. The problem is in the font. It's very simple and flat and isn't attractive at all. You could use any kind of calligraphic font to write "Guardian Angel Assignment" and a simple straight font for "Kim Namjoon" or could do vice versa. The template that you used is blue-green pastel, so basically, it's a soft colour, so you shouldn't use white color in it instead you could use dark colour such as black. The wrong colour of the font makes it harder to recognize the title. I hope you understand this.

Blurb: 4/5

The blurb is all well. I love that you mentioned the genre of the book at the beginning of the blurb. I didn't find any grammatical or punctuation issues in it. I just found only one mistake that's very minor. I saw you write "Kim Nam Joon" in the blurb, but you write "Kim Namjoon" everywhere in the book. So maybe it's a typing mistake. Also, I think if you give a sneak peek or a little description of the story, it'll look incredible.

Plot: 15/15

The plot is great. It's really unique. To be honest, I read a lot of paranormal or fantasy genre books, but it's my first time to read a book on guardian angels. The story is very interesting to the last point, and I'm looking forward to reading the further books of this series when I get time. I enjoyed every moment and every chapter of this book. I really have to appreciate this work.

Characters: 5/5

Nothing to say about the characters. Every character is perfect and well-defined. And I love each and everything of the characters. I also love your choice for the side characters. You chose Marvel characters too; it was a really nice and unique creation. It'll really be a mistake if I don't appreciate how you describe the natural flaws of the members and motivate them. If, coincidentally, one day any of the members read this, they'll really feel motivated.

Pacing: 4/5

The pacing is okay, though sometimes it feels like it's going a bit fast, like you could describe some more scenes of Ara and Namjoon. I think their bonding is very cute. But sadly, there aren't enough scenes of this couple.