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Hi guys, I just wanted to say that this story is going on a temporary hiatus. After looking at the statistics of my latest chapter that was published at July the number of views are extremely low. Seeing that I realised that maybe people aren't as interested or invested in the story anymore or the length of time it takes me to create a new chapter is too long. I fear that I may have made this story too long or I could have made a more concise story that is more enjoyable. I don't want to invest more time creating a story if people don't care about my story anymore as I came to this platform so I can hear some criticisms about my story writing skills.

However, I will continue the story if people post some comments saying that they want it to continue.  So I would appreciate if people to post comment on what they liked or disliked about the story. I would really like to see if there was anything I could have done better. So please don't be shy and post a comment on how you feel about this story. Also check out my other stories if you want. 

Thank you for anyone that has read even a single chapter of my story.

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⏰ Last updated: Sep 03 ⏰

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