Hey everyone! GamingLichdom here!
I wanted to write this chapter to ask everyone if I should change the future relationships for Nitrate, mainly focusing on Beera instead of including the Angel Vados.
Many people like Vados, and I think she's a very interesting character, but including both of these characters in the romance would require me to split my focus between them, lowering progress and character development for both.
However, I could instead remove Vados from the romance and have this story focus on Nitrate and Beera as a couple. This would help lessen all the unwanted 'fat' in the story and provide a deeper relationship between them.
This will be something I think over for a while, so I wanted to leave this chapter here and let people offer their opinions; you are the readers, so using your suggestions is a given.
Anyway, with all that said, I'll see you all later! :)
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Dragon Ball: Rise of Nitrate [DBZ/DBS X Icejin OC]
FanfictionAn ordinary human from earth wakes up one day as the eldest son of King Cold from the series 'Dragon Ball'. Not only that, but he was also born with an inconceivable amount of Ki that is powerful enough to challenge Majin Buu, and only increases as...
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