𝐃𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐥'𝐬 𝐃𝐞𝐭𝐚𝐢𝐥𝐬: 𝐌𝐈𝐍𝐃𝐋𝐄𝐒𝐒

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Hey guys, I've been getting questions about discrepancies and plot holes in past chapters, so let me be honest: it's because I edit a shitload of my chapters to make them more digestible/understandable (my daydreams shift dramatically from perspective to perspective like a film).

I've read the stats—no one really wants to slog through 12k+ word chapters of unnecessary stuff. But I can't help it; my brain won't let me move on until I've fleshed out a scene in a way that makes it fully visualizable. And yeah, that sadly includes all the 'unnecessary' stuff too—like random convos with side/unseen characters, filler moments, etc.

I wrote it all, but it's just chilling in my Google Docs, collecting dust lolol. If you're curious about specific things or if something feels like a plot hole, don't be afraid to ask in the comments. Nine times out of ten, if it's not about future spoilers, I've got a scene (long or short, depending on my mood that day) explaining it/written out.

So for One-shots dealing with things in your primary years/before the 10 year time skip, it'll be called  '𝐋𝐢𝐭𝐭𝐥𝐞 𝐃𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐥:...' ; and for those for the current times/after the time skip, it'll be called: '𝐃𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐥'𝐬 𝐃𝐞𝐭𝐚𝐢𝐥𝐬:...'

But seriously, feel free to ask for clarity; it makes my day knowing my little winxies are curious about how my delusional nogging conjures up such things. I might not answer right away, but I'll definitely get to it...

Enough of my rambling, without further ado, here's extra parts from ch. 23 ┃ 𝐡𝐨𝐧𝐞𝐲𝐞𝐝 𝐢𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐧𝐭:



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You made eye contact with Bakugo, his intense gaze locking onto yours. He immediately began making his way over to you, his determined stride cutting through the crowd.

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Shinso was in the process of gathering people for his own team, his eyes scanning the frantic mass of students as they scrambled to form alliances. He had just managed to catch Ojiro's attention, his quirk turning the boy into a mindless, dazed puppet, when something caught his eye.

It was you—standing alone amidst the chaos, a calm figure in the sea of frenetic movement. Shinso's gaze sharpened, intrigued by your stillness, but it was the sight of Bakugo striding purposefully towards you that made him pause.

A pang of curiosity struck him, and without realizing it, he found himself forgetting Ojiro, his focus entirely diverted to what was about to unfold.

Ojiro, meanwhile, stood frozen, staring blankly ahead. His expression was slack, the usual fire in his eyes extinguished under the weight of Shinso's quirk. He remained like that until—

"Ojiro, move it!" a voice called out, and before Ojiro could even comprehend, a shock of electricity danced across his skin, jolting him back to awareness. "Ahhh! What the-?" Ojiro yelped, shaking his head as the daze lifted. He turned just in time to see Kaminari trailing behind Todoroki, who was just ahead, his face set with determination.

Kaminari whined loudly, trying to convince Todoroki. "Come on, Todoroki! I promise I'll be super useful on your team! Just give me a shot, okay?"

Shinso didn't pay them any more attention. His eyes remained locked on Bakugo, and his feet moved almost on instinct. He began making his way towards you, weaving through the students without taking his eyes off the scene unfolding before him.

He couldn't help but feel a pull—something about Bakugo's approach, the intensity in his eyes, made Shinso's chest tighten with curiosity.

It didn't take long before he was close enough to hear Bakugo's growled mutterings, his body language radiating confidence, or perhaps arrogance. Shinso watched the determined expression on Bakugo's face, the way his jaw clenched with single-minded focus, and he found himself wondering—what was Bakugo planning to say to you?

The thought of watching Bakugo's unfiltered reaction to a petty interruption was too good for Shinso to pass up. He took a step forward, slipping between two arguing support course students, and moved directly into Bakugo's path.

"Oh?" The sound of your tilted voice almost made Shinso turn around but kept forward. His purple eyes glinted with interest, daring Bakugo to make the next move.

He was itching to see how the explosive blonde would react.

Bakugo's gaze snapped towards Shinso, his brows furrowing deeply. For a heartbeat, the two locked eyes—an electric tension passing between them. Shinso could almost see the gears turning in Bakugo's head, the struggle to decide whether to bulldoze through or engage.

"Move it, Sleepy Bitch," Bakugo snarled, his voice a low growl, pushing his way past Shinso with a rough shoulder shove that nearly knocked him off balance. Shinso stumbled slightly but quickly regained his footing, his smirk widening.

"She's already in a team," Bakugo called out behind him, clearly dismissing Shinso's presence.

Shinso chuckled under his breath, shaking his head. "We'll see about that," he muttered, his attention snapping back to you as you positioned yourself between the two boys.


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