So I have been thinking (and this isn't apart of the story at all, it had ended) to do some changes, and it is about the story and how it is built up.
I am going to write a new and better story, with new characters and lore, of course this book (The lost) will be up and running, and I wont do any changes to this book (It would take WAY too long, and it is most likely easier to just write a new book).
BUT like I said, I'll be writing another book, the whole story will be changed, it will have the same idea. Orphanage and everything alike. But it'll be better - Hopefully. Goals for the new book:
*Making the reading experience more immersive - Having more descriptions.
*Making a new story, but with the same idea - I won't be spoiling the ideas! So stay tuned.
*And of course, I might be changing the title of the book (key word: MIGHT)
"The lost" is now the end of the chapter. The new book, with the same idea, will be the new chapter - AND let me get this straight, it wont be the continuing of this book, it will be a NEW book, with the same idea.
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The lost
Short StoryThis is a story about a girl named Asha. Her parents died at the age of 10, she was sent to the orphanage... But this orphanage had something strange. A tradition. "What kind of tradition", You'll soon find out... (TW: This story has brief mentions...