Fonts: Some of the fonts don't look visible. The fonts would look cooler if they were bigger. And the way 'Entrapment' is written looks a bit more sci-fi than romantic. I suggest changing the font and making each of them bigger. (6/10)
Colors: The colors are a little bit too dark. Making them a bit brighter would change the tone of it, so I wouldn't do that. Maybe if red and black colors stayed the same and you changed the others, that would make it look better! (8/10)
Creativity: It is very creative, although it needs a little bit more spiciness to make it fit the tone of the book. (7/10)
Hook: The hook is perfect! It drags the readers inside and doesn't make them stop reading it! (10/10)
Overall: In total, the book does need many edits. The hook fits and the creativity is perfect. All of the other stuff could use some more work. (5/10)
Total Score: 36/50
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