Fonts: The fonts need to be more even. It would look nicer in a different font and the color of it could be a dark yellow or light red. (6/10)
Colors: The colors fit perfectly! I love the hair colors and the girls are just stunning! The background could use something, like an outside background or a music studio. (8/10)
Creativity: The creativity and the character design is amazing, but the background should have something. Maybe a shelf or a TV would look good. It would look better if the characters were walking on a creme pathway with trees to the side. (7/10)
Hook: The hook could find the perfect readers and drag them in. Some of them would leave
because of the background, and some of them would be dragged in because of the beautiful character design! (9/10)
Overall: What really bothers me is the background. It's just plain white. While the characters are the opposite. The hair color fits perfectly, as well as their uniforms. (9/10)
Total Score: 39/50
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