First off I'd like to say... don't freak out!
But... I unpublished 20 chapters for now.Don't worry!! I'm going to put them back, because I'm just going to edit them and fix a couple of things.
I also want to say thank you so sooo much for reading this book, I will be working more on it this month as the last month was very hectic personally.
Of course, I have a lot more time to do things, and I really really want to keep improving so when I'm re-reading certain things, it leads me to want to mess around with their interactions and really get into the psychology of the character.
Because, I don't want this just to be...
Tehe Luka x Adrien... teenage boys falling into stereotypes getting angy and going right into smut.
Because no, I want it to have a slow-burned, well developed, story. Because, as a miraculous-fan, we were ROBBED!!
The entire 5 season bs of watching Marinette be the most frustrating, incoherently-relentless character, and Adrien be pushed the side stripping EVERY-SINGLE good development he could've had—whist sending sane-people (Luka) to their deaths when things could've gotten interesting. I don't think it's what ANYONE would've wanted.
I want these teenagers to really know what it's like to go what they're going through and figure shit out. Why? Because this sets up better writing and character insight rather than rushing faster for the end of result of two people that have very limited-chemistry or are just rocks in the head.
Hear me out, I have watched Arcane to know, good writing... takes time. I mention this because, their show does representation so SO well without putting a label on them.
Because, in order to see the difference in anything, saying it is easier... but really SHOWING IT, is the best way you can represent anything.
At this point, there was an arc going on for Cat Noir. However, I DONT like that I rushed that, and I don't like that Marinette was getting over-developed and I had pieces to things that didn't make sense so I'm taking a lot of that out and really trying to push Adrien's development rather than the whole 'Security-Of-Secrets' thing which looking back at those chapters...
IDFK where I was going but I can see why no-one likes to read it, because we don't care about toddler-level fights of teenage girls we WANT drama but resolution with Adrien and Luka and I think...
I wanted to kind of make it as canonically-written as possible, but... now I don't want to have dumb Gaberial Agreste, dumb-villains, and goofy uncanny thoughts like the show because it gives me a headache if I'm re-writing something and I don't implement new things.
So, I will be moving things around, and improving things.
My issue is that... I see a vision of something, and then get clouded on HOW to get there. So, I want to make it very-clear on how I'd do so.
Which means, really thinking about things and noticing the flaws I have in my writing.
So again, please don't freak out! That you see it's on...
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°✰═════════════╛I will be working on it throughout this month to really understand things I want to see in this story, and understand what YOU GUYS would want to see.
It has helped a lot when people vote, or throw comments around whether it be, reacting, or complimenting, or even criticism, it really puts me on track and I really appreciate it.
Love you all so much! Thank you for your understanding!~
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RomanceLoneliness, Despair, Isolation, and a Broken Heart? That's all Adrien knew... until he showed up, a guy dressed in blue; someone that has had the snake miraculous for a while now−𝐕𝐢𝐩𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐨𝐧! He claims to help Adrien, but is consumed with somet...