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Title: Tangled Threads of Tradition and Love
Author: LittleCat_Kat
Grade: 87% B
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Review:
Disclaimer: excerpts do not belong to me blah blah blah. This was barely proofread. Bear with me.
Now what have we said about long titles? Okay, I guess I did say that 5-6 words maximum was acceptable, so that's on me, I set the bar too low. It does feel a bit long, though, or maybe it's just that I don't like the title in itself. The title is somewhat wordy and repetitive, too many T's. I don't know, I just feel like something more succinct and catchy could work. It doesn't stick in your head, know what I mean? It sounds like the name of an indie album and not the title of a book.
By the way, the chapter labels are HORRIFYING. You should NEVER be splitting your chapters into parts 1 and 2, and in NO WORLD should you be doing weird fonts and strikethroughs on your chapter titles. It makes me cringe so much just looking at it. Write the chapter labels normally I'm begging 😭😭😭😭
COVER & DESCRIPTION. ...Hghghghghghghghhhh.
So I do actually like the script font on the cover, the part of the title that's in red. I can't name that font off the top of my head although it looks sort of familiar, but it's pretty. (I would love to know what font that is if you know it, btw.) However. I cannot possibly imagine. What possessed you. To put the rest of your title. AND subtitle. In BLANKA! SWEET BABY JESUS!
