*NOT A STORY CHAPTER*
Hello my prized precious readers whom I adore.
I will delete this chapter soon but I am just posting to ask how you guys would feel about a mini rewrite/edit of some chapters of Loving Carter?
For some context, I was extremely excited and dedicated to writing this book at the beginning but my life kinda went downhill at some point and I think that reflected into the story.
I feel that I rushed the last 15 chapters and some sections are not true to character (i.e. Eli randomly hooking up with someone and Carter easily forgiving him for it haha! And also I don't think I fleshed out the intricacies of what happened between Carter and Ryder).
Some of the confused/negative comments on those chapters and about Eli only validate what I'm thinking.
There are also other sections that are not fleshed out enough like Eli "finding" his mom and Porter + Della's underdeveloped relationship that I think I could add to.
This in NO WAY means I am changing the main structure of the book or its characters, but rather fixing up some regrets.
Thoughts on a rewrite/edit of a few chapters and plot points? Or should I just leave the book as is?
I am unable to even read my books without cringing I fear so let me know! <3333
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Loving Carter
Romansa𝐆𝐑𝐔𝐌𝐏𝐘 𝐗 𝐒𝐔𝐍𝐒𝐇𝐈𝐍𝐄 Elijah West is a stubborn, moody asshole who overall dislikes other people. After Carter Sakuna (quite literally) runs into him, he finds her mysterious, loud and overall super annoying. At least that's what he told...
