Hello! So, I haven't updated or edited this book in years, and rereading this let me know it was desperately needed. Some of the story was rushed. There seemed to be no thought or storyline. The point in this book was the shitty boyfriend's best friend troupe; I don't think it was executed well, and frankly, the story wasn't over at all. At least, that's what I got from getting bored and rereading it.
I'll be honest; I was like 15 when I started writing this. I had no clue what I was talking about, and it showed. I was obsessed with MGK and couldn't find a fanfiction I wanted, so I attempted to write my own. So, for those of you who read this story and supported it even though it was shitty, thank you. Going back and reading your comments was fun, especially reading how you were screaming for Valarie to stop being so dumb.
Anyway, I've decided to edit and continue this story years later. If you have already read this book, you'll notice more than half the chapters were ripped out. It went from almost 30 to 10 chapters, and it needed it. None of the story was taken out; I merged the chapters because I couldn't understand why I thought 500 - 800 words was a decent chapter. That's a page and a half long of me dragging a scene out. I hate it when people do that, so I had to fix it (lol).
I hope you enjoy the updated version!
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Drown For Me//Colson Baker
FanfictionHis lips are soft, and it's sweet at first. Then it turns into something more. It's tainted with lust and I can't help but enjoy it. But I have a boyfriend. "Col-" I said trying to push him away from me a little but he kisses me again. I pull away...
