Reincarnated as Enemies [Prologue]

I realized something

Yeah, so, even though that would've been a plausible first chapter (and I'll probably use it in the future) it's something serious.

Well, a while back, some random guy stole this, and I couldn't (and still can't) take it down. I was devastated, because I thought that the credit for this story would've been stolen.

Luckily, I reread this, and realized some minor things.

1) It wasn't a slow burn, it was a NO BURN. Even though something did happen later, it did, in fact, happen LATER (emphasis on the caps)

2) The beggining was too corny, to say the least. Even if I liked the explanation, which I haven't written yet (even if a small part of it was already published) I didn't like the execution.

3) The power system was too soft. Even though I would have developed it further, I didn't like how anything could be done just because ## ### # ##### ###### ## ## ##########. (No, I won't say it bc I liked the idea of the cause and will probably use it for something else)

4) The characters (apart from the Kobu brothers, their mother), were too plain and predictable, and all of them (including those four), were to generic.

5) The title was horrible, typecasting the entire story into the generic Isekai. I want it to be a story that uses reincarnation as an actual tool that supports the story and plot. Not because it said "reincarnated" the story was about an op mc that 1shots everything and goes through the cliche story.

So yeah, I decided that I'd rewrite it with a harder power system, faster burn, make characters better and more relatable, not make it so corny, and write it better overall (this didn't save, so some ideas are missing)

I don't really care if rewriting from scratch discards you from competitions, if I am able write this story the way I envisioned it, I don't have a problem

If you are at least a bit curious about what I'll do, check out "Born to Kill You" here on Wattpad.

I hope you have a great day, and see you there! (Or maybe not)

(I'll keep this up just in case to help me with the copying thing)