"Four?"
"Yes?"
I speed walk up to the nurse who called me."Is she okay?is she awake?"I question her.
"I'm very sorry to tell you but she is in a coma,she has only a 20% chance of waking up.Im very sorry."
My whole world came crashing down.I run but I don't know where. I just keep running.I hear the group calling for me but I keep running until I get to the chasm."Don't" I hear Zeke say."20%"Is all he says and I think,I think that what if that 20% works and I'm gone and she wakes up.I can't let that happen.i won't let that happen.
I walk back to the hospital with Zeke. "Can I see her?"I ask Zeke."I'll ask"
Zeke asks the nurse behind the counter and she tells him what room and he brings me.
I am scared to open the door.scared to see what my father did.
I walk in and see a fragile girl.
She doesn't look like my Tris.
The bruises on her face,
The cut from her cheek to her chin.
I can't let him live for what he did.
I can't.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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FanfictionTris and Tobias are in love. Nothing could ever happen to break them apart... At least not until Marcus disapproves of Tris and wants her dead. She starts to get texts and wonders who it's from until someone shows up at her door one day... Amazing...