Critic: WynterFrost
Quick Summary: Toadstep is a loyal ThunderClan warrior but all that changes when he catches a ShadowClan she-cat on his territory.
Liked/Disliked: I was a bit skeptical about reading a fan fic that mainly centered around a forbidden romance between cats from different Clans. Though the writing is good and descriptive, I was getting a bit bored with it and it seemed to be travelling down the same path of many other stories about this subject. That was until I got to the latest chapter (chapter six at the time of writing). I was honestly so surprised, I really didn't see that twist coming. My attention has been recaptured and I want to see what happens next. One thing I didn't like about this book was that Toadstep and Olivenose's relationship remained undetected, surely at least one cat would be suspicious of them together.
Author Improvement: The one thing I would suggest is to have some cats suspicious of Olivemose and Toadstep, their relationship just seemed a bit too perfect.
Final Thoughts: A bit of a slow start but things are starting to get very interesting.
Rating: 3.5/5
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