A/N: okay so,, your girl never thought this piece of crap would go anywhere okay?? The writing is obviously very amateur, but I'm glad it turned out this bad, because now I have an actual wattpad account and I've learnt from this horrific mistake. Somehow, some of you readers actually read this and want to know what happened. I logged onto this account (after like 3 years, no joke), and I found a draft from three years ago. I had written this a LONG time ago. A writer doesn't write the same in a span of a few days, let alone three whole years.
Anyways, this is an unfinished draft of something I had written three years ago.
Sirius: Why is that paragraph so long I can't read.
Me: *smacks Sirius upside the head till he passes out and lays somewhere in a coma* (I did this for old times' sake)
James POV
"So first we go to honeydukes then the bookstore plus we go and have butterbeer where padfoot, wormtail and moony'll be. And then zonkos?"
I look at Lily with a begging look and she says "fine..." I smile and give her a quick peck.
We head off to honeydukes where we find many Hogwarts students are eating acid pops and the flavored beans (which they all gag or puke at.) And many other sweets as lily smells the heavenly air and immediately rushes off to find sweets Tenn minutes later I have mines too and lily goes off to pay. I smile and stop her saying "my treat." She says no and starts to say she will and all I do is say "please?" She smiles. I pay and we leave. Soon we're at the three broomsticks and I yell over to four couples "OI! PADFOOT! WORMTAIL! MOONY! FRANK!"
Lily POV
I smile as the four couples come over although I frown because I still have no idea why the marauders call each other those names other than remus whose referred moony because the marauders don't know but I have realized and put together the pieces that remus is a werewolf. I've known since third year because every month 'his sick aunt' needed his help when he looked sick himself and returned with scars. Not to mention how moody he could be just like a girl on her monthly.
"Lils!" Marlene, al , and avery call over walking towards me with grins on their faces along with olivia following. Something about that girl seemed a little off. But anyway marls had a grin on her face and said
"So.. You and james?" I blushed. The girls teased me some more with olivia watching as I gave them an eye message about the girls night out as they nodded in response.
Marlene POV
I can't wait for tonight!
Alice POV
"Lily you ask james yet out tonight?" She nods. I smile. Tonight was gionna be fun.
Avery POV
Girls night here I come!
Olivia\ bellatrix POV
Hmm.. I get a hint of a girls night. And me sneaking around of course . "So Olivia." I flinch at being called but quickly say yes to the mudblood Evans "Are you in Hufflepuff?" I nod. Ugh. I had to speak to HER. After thirty minutes of hearing them chat nonsense we get up. "See ya later!" Evans calls as I nod along with the others.
James POV
We all get out of the three broomsticks and me and lily are staring into each others eyes for a second when I hear something.
Lily POV
I hear a voice coming closer and turn around to see what was going on. There were three drunk guys coming towards me. Dont panic lils you have your wand. I check for my wand. Its still there. James after a second looks back at me and smiles. I smile back but then I feel a hand brush up my shouldern and look at james. His expression is furious d he is getting his wand off. I turn around and see a drunk guy. "Hey beautiful."
"I have a boyfriend." I say
"We can change that."
"Cocky arent we?"
"You know you want some."
"Nope." I say looking him down then up i think james thought something else of this because he had a flash of huryt in his eyes so i held his hand tightly which the other guy took hold of. not taking my wand out because well he was drunk. Not in his senses but I do put a stern expression on my face and say
"Get. Your. Hand. Off. Me." James gets up and tries to remove his hands off me which he puts back on me.
"No. And thats just the beginning." He says with a grin. I take out my wand james is muttering a spell but I stop him.
"Look I'm giving you a chance. James will kill you if you don't go. And please take your hands off me." I say whispering thlast part because he was squeezing my neck. He took it off and said.
"Lily, lily,lily I'll see you later." He said. Did he know me?! Before I could say anything and I'm surprised James doesn't have steam coming out of his ears because he screamed as loud as he could
"YOU BLOODY GIT! STUPEFY!" the guy shifts before the spell hits him which I find surprising. "Petrificus totalus" he says with ease. James dodges. "Sec- the guy is gone. James runs but I say in a shivery voice because there was a mad guy after me! He knew me. "J-james let's go." I drag him jinto zonkos to cheer him up. He still has a grudge on the guy and I m not letting him go now because if I do james might do something wrong. After a few minutes james is saying "lils I'm getting some dungbombs okay?" I nod not caring because i m still shocked I mean how did that happen? It was normal just thi
This is where I realized my writing was horrible and I needed to improve lol
I could finish this book, but honestly I can't translate my own plot
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Jilly: Its complicated
FanfictionLily might like james but well its complicated. lily has a fear of getting her heart broken because james well was a player but what will happen after a date at hogsmeade? maybe things aren't so complicated anymore.
