Adopted by Steve McGarrett

I'm about to break hearts here :/

So hello my lovely readers, from the title you know its bad and it is and it isn’t.

 As you can see I haven’t been uploading in a little while and I have been having serious arguments with myself over it. Over the last few weeks I have had several critiques done on this story and they have all come to the same conclusion as I have, this story had lost its way.

 I personally don’t think that the last chapter holds the same amount of charm the first one does and that bugs me, honestly it does get boring. Paige, a writer on here has been helping me a great deal outside Wattpad and I love her so much for it, but I need to get my head around what I am going to write first.

 As you can probably tell I don’t plan my stories, I just write and that has it’s pros and cons like anything. I not going to start planning it now, but what I am going to do is take it away and do a fair amount of editing and rewriting. I don’t plan on changing the genre of the story, but to that I plan on making a lot more descriptive, so I won’t be suitable for younger reads. Currently that is the only way I can see that I can make a real go of this story and you may think that I am going the wrong way about it and there must be other ways of doing it. So, if you can think of others ways tell me I would love to give them a shot, so leave a comment below or PM.

 I hope the original author can understand what I am talking and that I know she had rules about changing certain things, I think I may be breaking some of those rules and I apologize, but if you want this story to carry on I need to do something. So I am sorry.

 If any of you have any questions or ideas that could appear then please come and talk to me.

Either PM me, comment below or email at, danniieagle@outlook.com

Thank you to all the readers are all amazing and I really wouldn’t be here if it wasn’t for you, so once again thanks!!

DanniiEagle