14.Goodbye

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this *short* story is coming to an end. It wasn't very good, I know that, but I gave effort into it. One of my points that I was trying to get across was that you have to finish these types of crossovers, you really do, and I hope I will have given enough closure by the story's end.   Another point I was  attempting to get across was that the climax and the rising actions of the story don't have to be fights or wars or even be that big. They can be  seemingly miniscule, yet have profound impacts.  I don't think that worked out too well. That'll be my goal for my next story. 

There wasn't  originally any planned message or lesson, but I suppose if I chose one it would be that we can't all be heros. Quite frankly, in someone else's eyes, you're a villain, or antagonist in some sense, unable to be truly good. Maybe that's even a stretch.  

I'd like to thank all those who commented. Comments really are like matches to  the light  of my day. Thank you to those who stuck with the whole  story and read every word. It means a lot you even read what I have to say. 

I suppose this is just babbling nonsense, that may or may not get taken to thought or heeded at all. in that case, Oh well. time to enjoy a Sherbert Lemon. 


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