Stole My Heart (A Ziall and Larry Love Story)

Author's Note/Chapter 18 - Could It Be Love?

Hi, so everyone who read Chapter 18 knows that it was R-Rated and it was making all of the future chapters R-Rated because of that and I wasn't happy. So I've moved it into a new book called 'R-Rated parts of my fanfic' (original, I know) just so that my story can be rated as PG-13. Please people read it (if you haven't already) but if you don't want to then that's fine. The actual scene that caused the story to be R-Rated isn't compulsory but basically the chapter is all about Harry trying to use Beth (the prostitute) in an attempt to understand his sexuality and his feelings for Louis. But it doesn't work and he leaves after they only have foreplay because he keeps thinking about Louis a lot and as he leaves he tells Beth that he can't have sex with her because he thinks he's in love with someone. At the same time, Beth can't stop thinking about Liam and she realises how much she does actually love him. It's worth a read just to witness the character development, that is if you don't mind reading smut of course, but to be honest I struggled writing it and I found it a bit uncomfortable.

Anyway, thank you for all the reads, follows, votes etc it means a lot. I did have just over 700 reads before I removed Chapter 18 and the previous Author's Note so I don't know how many I have now but I'm really hoping that this story can reach over 1,000 reads. It's nowhere near finished yet and even I haven't completely decided how it will end! So, on that note, any suggestions would be welcome. If you have an idea about what could happen with any of the pairings in the story (including just the simple Bromances) then please just comment. Just to recap the pairings in the story are: Liam and Beth, Liam and Danielle, Harry and Louis, Louis and Eleanor, Zayn and Niall. And the bromances are: Liam and Niall, Harry and Zayn, Liam and Louis, Niall and Louis, Harry and Niall, Louis and Zayn.

Zayn and Liam, Zayn and Louis, and Harry and Liam haven't really been established yet but if you like those bromances then drop in some suggestions. Well, thanks again. I'm in the middle of writing the next chapter for this story right now. I'm hoping it's going to be a long one or I might end up slitting it into chapters (I don't know yet) but that should be up soon. Sorry I haven't updated for so long but I've been busy with exams and uni stuff and driving lessons and being ill and going away and I haven't had much chance to update but, well, yeah. Anyway, I'm waffling now so thanks again and goodbye for now - Scott xx