How I think the Blood Moon Ball should have ended (Conpleted)

Chapter: 11

"Yeah, you could say that this note explains everything and I hope that Star can forgive me." Marco said as  he looked down at the note. The bell rang and Marco walked over to Star's locker and slid the note inside. Marco saw Star walking to her locker and he ran over to her. "Star, I'm sorry. I don't know how many times I have to say it but I let a note in your locker that explains everything." Marco said as he hugged Star. "Marco, you know that I'm trying to stay away from you so that you can make your choice. You know that I'm leaving to go back to Mewni on Friday." Star said as she opened her locker and grabbed her things. "Star, you know that I can't live without you." Marco said while holding Star's hand. Star's eyes were tearing up as she pulled away and said "Marco, I can't deal with right now!" Star ran off to her next class and Marco ran after her. At the end of the day Star opened her locker, she grabbed her backpack and the note. Star walked home by herself and ran up to her room. She locked her door and ran to her bed. Star was about to cry when she opened up the note. Star was having trouble with reading the note since she couldn't bare about reading all about Marco loving Jackie more than her. All of a sudden Star heard the doorbell and she ran downstairs to answer the door. Star opened the door and couldn't believe her eyes. It was Jackie.