These are surprisingly fun to write! XD
This one will actually be a Gary Sue
Blazeheart
40 moons
Tom
ThunderClan
Flame-colored ginger fur, blazing amber eyes
Strong, determined, caring
Flamestorm (mother), Robinstar (father), Stonefoot (brother)
Blazekit was an average kit. He was playful, and loved to explore. When he became an apprentice, he was the best fighter and second-best hunter, right behind his brother. Stonepaw soon decided to become the medicine cat apprentice, though, so Blazepaw was in the lead. Blazepaw defeated the ShadowClan leader in a battle, and was honored in the making of a warrior. He was only seven moons old. He soon fell in love with a WindClan she-cat, despite his loyalty to the warrior code. He told no one, and she soon had his kits, Reedkit and Splashkit. Sparkfeather, his WindClan mate, joined ThunderClan and was protected by Blazeheart when she was attacked. Soon, a battle with WindClan was started at the camp. Blazeheart protected the nursery on his own, despite the seven stronger, older warriors trying to steal the half-clan kits. The battle was won, and Blazeheart was honored.
These are so fun to write...
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