Name: Kyle Wayne
Age: 15
Appearance: 5'8, Biracial ( like me !!) , blue eyes , black hair , usually wears tight grey shirt with black buttons , either gym shorts ( some black Nikes) , or black pants ( black hi tops) , has a lot of band bracelets, and a black and grey beanie .
Personality: funny, outgoing , caring , optimistic, adventurous
Family : Batfamily, and his dad's not rich at all family
History : Bruce Wayne's cousin Lisa Wayne moved to Georgia to expand the business, after failing she got married had a kid , sold their Goergia mansion, and left Kyle to live with his grandparents and aunt ( discriptive I know ) , then with Kyle getting an acceptance letter from Gotham academy, he moves with his cousin Bruce , and later after a lot of plot finds out Bruce is batman , adopts the persona of Stitch
My Thoughts:
I belive it's safe to assume that this is for a roleplay that's based on DC Comics, or at least close to that, so I'll bear that in mind. He is very realistic and human, he seems relatable, although his mother getting married right after a business failure doesn't exactly fit. You may want to change that a bit, you may want to consider her marriage being the reason she moved and therefore had a business failure, or something like that. Great job with this character!
Gary Sue?:
Doesn't seem like it!
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