Thanks to LunarTheDarkAbsol
Full name- Ashaline Tyler
Age- 14
Gender- Female
Date of Birth- October 24
Date of Death- April 18th 2000
Hair and Eyes- blond hair with teal eyes
Clothes- usually wears a long blue dress that has a blood stain on it, and a ribbon around her neck.
Small backstory- Her parents were alcoholics and they treated her badly, they broke beer bottles on her head, pushed her into closets and rarely let her out, then one day she had enough and suicided with a large broken, glass shard of a window.
Personality- very quiet and tries to hide a lot from other people and likes to confuse them/misdirect them. Formed Bipolar disorder so can quickly change emotion
Weaknesses- When people find her and stare at her, when people yell, make loud noises
Likes- small quiet areas, nice people.
Dislikes- strangers, loud noises, blood
My Thoughts: I love the character but, (no offense) it kind of seems like a bit of a tragic life. That isn't bad or anything, but maybe try to add something at least a little bit happy, like she won a drawing contest or something. Other than that, you did really well with this OC!
Mary Sue: Definitely not!
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