Fallingstars99 your book has a pretty interesting story; its not completely cliché and it keeps readers interested.
But your way of writing, the paragraph forming, capitals, are not very organized, making it a little bit difficult to read.
We suggest that, you need to form paragraphs, they will make your book easily understandable; also may be you could read the chapters again, to see if there were any major spelling problems, I didn't notice any.
I hope you update soon. I liked the story and really liked the Ellie 😛.
Please do paragraph it properly and your views will surely increase.
We will also promote your story by reading your story from our original accounts too.
Thanks. Hope we were not rude. Please approach us again.
And welcome to the LLL CLUB.
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