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review by sas

I killed my brother by shubhankar_13

I just have few things to say.
Well your writing has improved,punctuation,paragraph everything is fine.

But I think this wasn't a short story or a long story.
It was just pieces that were just not going right no thriller,no obvious reason why he killed his brother.

This story is really negative,I thought maybe by the end there would be something amazing like a moral but it was so dark.

I hope this isn't a real story.

You can't kill your brother just because he used to blame you ir for sleeping with your girlfriend.

Just cut off those kind of relation and if they are asking for forgiveness give a chance.

This is sending a bad message brother so hope you change a bit.

Thank you

Sasmina