EdwinBrown9 - 7 days
- Firstly I found the book amazing by how it included many deep thoughts about different topics which was true.
-Many of the chapters are like songs, which can catch attention of the reader.
- If you are listing things then you can use coma instead of fullstops, in that way the writing will seem easy to read.
- I have also noticed that you have used capital letters in middle of sentences sometimes. It can be improved.
- You have started your paragraphs from different thoughts, but sometimes the thought travel else where in middle of the sentence and at the end of the paragraph the thought is mixed up with another.
- Writing can be improved to express those deep thoughts in your book.
- Overall the ideas were really good and can pull the attention of the readers but the paragraphs can be made in a different way to represent the writing to make it more easy to read.
- I will give 3.5/5 for the book as the book was interesting. Moreover the thoughts were different and had travelled to many topics and areas.
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