A Crazy Little Thing Called Love

Ch 15: Tris

Okay so I'm sorry that this is insanely short but I wanted it to be it's won chapter...

CH 15: POV BRYCE

Although I try as hard as I can I can't will myself out of this coma. And what's worse is that it was my own idiocy that caused the coma. I tripped after Tris shot me and hit my head. I can't believe how much of an idiot I am.

As well as being an idiot about giving myself a concussion, I'm also the biggest idiot for letting Tris go. Even if I act like I never cared for her, it's all a farce, I did, and always will think she's a marvelous person. My greatest regret is letting Tobias get her. I know they're right for each other and will take something terrible to break them apart.

And I'm willing to go that far to get her back.

POV KAYLA

I come back to Bryce's station in the infirmary during my lunch break, like I have every day for three days now. I can't stand seeing him like this. I love him so much- and I should we've been together since 6th grade, and that's four years.

I pull up the stool next to Bryce's bed and sit down next to him, taking his hand. "Bryce, baby? Can you hear me? Well I hope you can. I have to talk to you..." I keep telling him about all my problems, like I would if he were awake. I tell him about my hangnail on my newly manicured thumb, and how I need a hair cut due to my split ends. After finishing those complaints I move onto to the worst one- Tris. "But Bryce, Tris, that whore you we're dating, she's getting so much attention, everyone's talking about her and I can't stand it. I'm gonna have to do something about it." I look up at the clock, oh god I have to get to class! "Sorry Brycey-Boo, I have to go now, I'll come back during my free-period." I begin to rush away when I see his lips move slightly.

I rush back over to him and lean my ear over his mouth, willing him to speak again. "Trispp... Trishh... Tris.. TRIS... Tris." OMG. Why is he thinking her name? What's wrong with him? All I know is that tears are streaming down my eyes, leaving black trails of mascara.

I run out of the infirmary, bawling.

okay even though it's extremely short, this was os fun to write. and hey it was an early update, yeah? okay so after I re'read this it reminded me of that scene in Harry Potter where Ron's in the infirmary and he's unconscious and he starts mumbling Hermione's name, even though he's dating Lavender ! And so I just wanted to make it clear, I was not trying to steal Miss Rowling's ideas, just that's what this chapter happened to be! ahah okay please review!