Angel to Demon(Percy Jackson Fan fiction)

fixed....ish

Percy's POV

My mind had a million things going though it. My thoughts were tossed around like junk in a vacuum cleaner.

I need Mr. D.

It hurts everything. Help me!

Voices in my mind laughed at me. I giggled aloud, not being able to control it.

Why me?

(The bold is the voice in his mind, underlined is him)

"Because its fate," the voice shouts in my mind, which seems to echo, getting louder and louder. It's making me scream. I'm trying to block it out.

Who are you?!

Call me Freaker

What?

okay. I say in my mind, and Freaker starts trying to annoy the living shit out of me.

Soon it gets to the point where I can't take it anymore. While Annabeth and Mr. D are running though the door, I grab my head and squeeze my eyes shut.

HEY, BABY.

"SHUT UP!" I scream.

Mr. D walks over to me and puts a hand on my head. "Annabeth, hold him down."

She grabs my wrists and pins down my legs with all her weight, and Mr. D starts doing his thing.

"Get off of me!" I yell and squirm around.

Soon, the peaceful bliss with no pain starts going away.

"No," I say.

Pain is all I feel.

The sanity is back in me now, and Mr. D brings his hand away.

I start to cry. Annabeth hugs me, and I hug her back tightly. I'm shaking. Everything hurts.

"Shh. Shh. It's okay. You're out now," Annabeth says, rubbing my back.

After a bit, I calm down and close my eyes. The pain I feel everywhere soon fades as I fall into darkness. It's my lucky day. It happens to be a nightmare.

"HURRY UP!" Abyss yells to me. "GET RUNNING!"

My mission, or torture, is to run 5 times around the inter Abyss, full sprint.

"Why me?" I whisper/breath out and push myself faster. The wounds on my back sting like crazy. I try to ignore it.

My messed up ankle causes me to trip, breaking my sprint. I stay down and shiver at my consequence. A tear leaks out of my eye.

"My lungs already hurt enough!" I yell at Abyss as he places a foot on my back, causing pain to jolt through me. I scream a bit, hurting my already sore throat.

"I told you that if you broke the sprint, there would be a worse consequence!" Abyss shouted at me. A ton of annoyance seeped into his voice. He yanked me up by my hair, and I yelped.

"Now you're coming with me," Abyss says smirking and pulls me towards the room.

Tear form in my eyes. I hate this part.

(Time skip after Abyss does his thing to Percy)

Abyss walks out of the room leaving me there chained to the bed, naked and shivering. I stare at the wall a head of me, wondering why he had to do that to me.

Abyss walks back in with a black tipped knife that has purple towards the bottom. I've seen this many times. It's Abyss metal. The thing causes so much pain in one cut that you black out.

I whimper as my torturer comes closer to me with it and pushes it toward my arm. He cuts into my forearm.

All I feel is pain.

I scream at the horrible burning sensation throughout my whole body and pass out .

(After the dream)

I wake up with a gasp, sitting upright, which causes my broken rib to hurt like Hades. I yelp and lay back down.

No one is in the room, except for me.

That burning sensation still lingers throughout my body, but very faintly.

I lay back down, wincing as I do so and think about the horrors of the dream.

"Why me?" I whisper aloud and lay my head on the pillow.