OK, so I guess you guys don't know how I could do better on this story so I'm just going to keep writing it. I have gotten way more reads and votes (obviously. I haven't updated since the beginning of August ;) so I'm really excited about that but I really REALLY would like it if you could tell what I'm doing wrong or how I could improve. Thanks! -xAx
Louis' POV
"Oh my god, that plane ride took FOREVER!" I groan as I haul my luggage into the room me and Niall and Harry were going to share.
"Yeah, well at least we're here now." Harry says.
"Hey, did either of you bring any snacks for the plane ride that you didn't use?" Niall asks.
Harry and I look at him like 'Really Niall?'
"Oookkk, apparently not." he says.
"Isn't it cool that Little Mix is here too?" Harry says while collapsing on the sofa. "Now Zayn won't have to drag us to their apartment and they won't have to come here."
I sigh and sink onto the couch next to him. "I wish it was just us." I mutter under my breath.
"SUCCESS!" We hear Niall shout from the kitchen. He then comes into the living room with a bag of crisps and a mouthful of pretzels.
He sits down on a armchair across from us and continues muching.
Harry scowls. "Were you planning on sharing?" he asks.
Niall stops eating and thinks for a moment. "Nope!" he says and goes back to his crisps.
Harry rolls his eyes. "Of course not." Niall just sticks his tongue out at him.
We sit there for a couple minutes just listening to Niall munching on his crisps.
"That's it!" I finally say.
Harry and Niall look up at me. "What's it?" Harry asks.
"I have to go out and do something." I reply.
"You'll get mobbed." He says back flaty. I roll my eyes.
"Thanks. I really needed that." He shrugs.
"I'll just take the alleys or something." I mutter to myself.
"Take alleys?! Good luck." Harry says and then bursts out laughing.
Jeez these boys really get on my nerves sometimes.
Sorry this chapter is so short. The one after the next will be longer. It's gonna have both POV's in it. :);) anyways, PLEASE comment on how I can make this story better. Thankssss! ;) -xAx
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