Hey! I just wanted to thank everyone for the 100+ views. I know to a lot of people on here its not really a big deal to have 100 views but for me it is because I work really hard to get my emotions on these poems as best as I can so everyone can relate to them so THANK YOU so much for all the support and comments you guy & girls have given. It means a lot.
And one more thing I just wanted to let everyone know that I JUST wrote this poem. Like I sat down and wrote it and went over it a thousand times and now I'm publishing it. Usually I wait a couple of days to show anyone a poem I make but since I haven't written anything in a long time I thought it would be a great idea to publish a new one to celebrate all the views. Please tell me what you think (negative and positive comments are always welcome.) Again, thank you for all the views. And I hope you enjoy.
(One more thing, if I come back and read this poem and decide I don't like it...I may or may not come and take it down. It just depends on if you like it or not.)
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May 26, 2016
When we first started out I thought our love was so strong,
like nothing in this world could ever bring us down,
but now I see you were just pretending all along,
while going behind my back preparing for the knockdown.
But here we go again
I can't believe I let you back in thinking you wouldn't stab me in the back
but it turned out you were only acting like my friend while planning another attack.
I'm really getting tired of all this
Its always the same game you play
I've been waiting for a twist
but you always act the same way.
So this is it, I'm standing up and untying my wrist
hopefully one day you'll realize how you treated me
and see that it was never okay.
But before I walk away, I just have one question for you
Of all the people to manipulate and lie to
why did you choose me?
Why couldn't you just let me be
instead turning my dream into a nightmare
when you know that's not fair.
But I guess it doesn't matter anymore
our love is broken and shattered all over the floor.
But don't think I'm sticking around to help you clean in up
because now its my time to stand up and finally get out of this rut.
-R
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Thanks To You
PoetryThis is a collection of poems about the person I love and all the crap they put me through. But it's also mixed in with other poems. I hope you can relate and I hope you enjoy.