Perfect Living (Louis Tomlinson Fanfic)

Chapter 8

*Bit of a sexual scene here, apologies from me*

-Melissa Pov-

We ate our pizza and decided to go upstairs because we were tired. "Louis... I'm ready" I whispered, looking at him. "Are you sure Mel? Like, really sure?" Louis asked warily. "Yes, I'm positive. I want you" I replied cheekily. "In that case" Louis started kissing me passionately, he pushed me onto the bed, still kissing me.

He was lying on top of me when I started tugging at his tee shirt. I pulled it off him and threw it to one side, he did the same with mine. I ripped off his trousers so that all he was wearing was his boxers. I then pulled off my jeans, all whilst kissing Louis. He carefully took off my bra and also threw that on the floor. Then he started kissing my neck and he slowly moved down, leaving a trace of kisses on my chest. He pulled off my underwear then his boxers. 'Im ready' I kept telling myself, knowing that the first time always hurts and you bleed, but I needed him inside me, I wanted him so bad. "Do it" I said moaning. "Whatever you say baby" he said seductively, "It'll hurt though".

"It's fine Louis, I want you, do it" and he inserted himself into me. I winced in pain but I soon forgot about it. "Faster" I moaned, and Louis let out a moan too. I could see he was enjoying it. "Mel..." and Louis' voice trailed off. He lay down next to me, "That was perfect Mel" he whispered. "I know" I replied, "Let's change the sheets quickly" I said. Within 10 minutes the bed was fresh and I was lying on Louis' chest, he was asleep and I slowly drifted off.

-Louis Pov-

I woke up and the events of last night came rushing back. It was amazing, I love Melissa so much. I had her in my arms and she woke up slowly, staring at me. I planted a kiss on her cheek. "Morning beautiful" I said. "Hey" she said smiling, "I'm gonna go make breakfast, want some?" she asked. "No thanks" I replied, not really feeling my appetite. While Mel was downstairs I hopped in the shower and got washed, then I got dried and dressed. I walked downstairs and grabbed Mel by the waist, kissing her neck. "What was that for?" she asked with a grin on her face. "Because I love you" I answered. "I love you too" she said. "There's breakfast on the table if you want some, I'm gonna go get ready" she continued, and ran upstairs. I was planning on taking her out for a picnic because it was sunny out. About half an hour later Mel came back downstairs. "Looking beautiful today as usual" I said cheekily. She smiled at me. It was half 9 so we had a few hours to put in. "How about we go shopping?" I suggested, "We could get a taxi there and back?". "Okay" she replied, grabbing her jacket, "Let's go".

-At the shopping centre-

"Is there anything you want?" I asked. "No I'm just looking" Mel replied. All of a sudden there was a smash of a window and a man crashed to the floor, another man standing over him with a gun. Everyone was screaming and running, but we were only a few meters away from where the man with the gun was, chances are, if we ran we would be shot. "Mel, slowly back away into the shop and go behind the counter" I whispered to Mel, but loud enough so she could hear me, "Quick, before he shoots one of us" and we slowly backed away.

*Right so I'm not sure about this chapter? Is it okay? Comment and vote please, I'd really appreciate it if you left your opinion as this is my first fanfic.

Also, what do you think will happen? Who is the man with the gun? And who is lying on the floor?*