Unwelcome Visitor

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Wrens POV-

"Okay okay. Favorite sport?" Louis asks me, after he stops laughing

"Baseball. Best sport on earth." I say and he scoffs

"Soccer is the best ma'am" He says and I laugh at him

"Baseball is an american tradition!" I say and he smiles

"Soccer is older than baseball." He says and drinks his coffee

"So is boxing" I say and punch his shoulder.

He acted like it really hurt him, and I laugh and then he does too.

"Okay okay Rocky, calm down." He says and we both burst into a laugh

"Okay whens your birthday?" I ask

"December 24th. Yours?" He asks

"Your joking right? Im born on December 26th!" I say and we both laugh.

"Wow weird" He says and I nod, drinking some of my coffee.

We had been here since 5:45 and watched the sun rise. He never asked me why I was upset, just tried to cheer me up. I appreciated that.

"Wren." He says and I look up

His face was barley inches away from mine, and we both leaned in.

Louis didnt really make the kiss controlling. It was soft, and relaxed. I had a little tingle run threw my body everytime we did kiss, and I loved it.

He pulled away and smiled.

"Well, want me to walk you back to your dorm?" He asks and I nod

He grabs my hand after he held the door open for me. I smiled at our hands and then I looked at Louis face. I smiled and looked down.

We chatted about little things on the way back, and it was comfortable. When we made it back to the dorm, I invited him in, but he nicley declined.

"Im exhausted, and Im pretty sure you are to." He wasnt wrong on that part.

"Well thank you Louis. I mean it. I probably would have been laying here crying if you hadnt have been there." I say and he smiles.

"Well im glad I could make you happy" He says and grabs my hand.

He slowly brings my hand to his mouth and kisses it.

"It has been a pleasure ma'am." He says and I laugh and curtsie

He bows and smiles at me.

"See you later?" He says and I nod, biting my lip.

He leans in and kisses me. I act shock.

"Sir! How inaproppriate! My father would have you killed for stealing a kiss." I say and I almost laugh, breaking my character.

Louis keeps it going, but not after laughing a little first.

"Well ma'dam, Your just too beautiful. Plus the whole lip biting thing, my weakness" He says and we both crack up.

"Alright. Im super tired. Im gonna go. See you later Wren" he says and I nod.

I close the door and put my back on the door and slide down and smile.

Louis was definitly a keeper.

I got about 4 hours of sleep until I hear knocking on my door. I groan and get up.

I unlock it and open it, to find Louis there with a big huge penguin, my favorite animal, and red tulips, also my favorite. I smile and he does too.

"I forgot to do this early." He says and walks in and sets everything down.

"Wren, I really like you, so will you do the honor of being my girlfriend?" He asks

I smile and bite my lip. I nod and jump and hug him.

He laughs and he spins me around. Whe  he sits me back down on the ground, he grabs my face with his hands and kisses me.

"Well im glad you said yes"

The only voice I never wanted to hear.

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