We're Still Fighting (A Zombie Apocalypse Story)

A giant note before the story begins/classified ads?

 Summary:

After a failed evacuation in their boarding school, Lilac Ride and her friends find out that the world has gone crazy; an infection has spread, turning both the living and the dead into flesh-hungry zombies. Worst of all, the only adult company they had is dead, and they're stuck inside their school with dwindling supplies and no hope of rescue. Will they find a way to get out alive and find a safe place to stay?

In a world where the undead ate the living, you never know.

Hi :D this is my new zombie story xD I have been dreaming A LOT about zombies and school lately, and I've decided to put them together!!!! comments will TOTALLY be accepted xD please tell me how my story sounds, if it's okay or not xD and please do check my grammar :D (I still accept character suggestions, for those who are interested, like coolkainzor who owns the character Kain Urban ^.^)

 sorry for the long note!!