Sometimes it really makes me cringe when I read poorly written twd fanfic so I've decided to help you guys out.
This book is obviously just for laughs so don't be offended. If it helps you then great!
This is one of many "how not to" books so just...
Your OC should not bang Rick Grimes and get pregnant with twins 3 seconds after Lori's death
Like??
It took Rick nearly a year to move on from Lori to what's her name and arguably even longer since that thing with no arm McGee was basically Rick chasing after Lori's ghost, but it's whatever
And Daryl is like a shy, anti-social, smol bean. It's gonna take him more than a while to have sex with your OC
Glenn? Well, do what you want with your OC and Glenn because he's down for whatever tbh, but he's also a fragile spring roll, so don't hurt my Korean Ray of Sunshine's feeling please.
Carl. Carl Grimes. Carl fucking Grimes.
Lemme stop you right there.
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Carl is a literal child. I'm not saying your OC shouldn't hook up with him (if your story is a Carl fanfic go right ahead) but let's keep this classy.
It should take a while for your OC and Carl to lose their virginities (I'm hoping they're both virgins).
Two 13 year olds should not be making love in the prison (I am guilty of this).
