Chapter 1 Hpov (Hawk kit point of view)

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I watch the other kits play fighting in the snow outside of the nursery I got up my lame paw making it difficult but I kept walking to the fighting kits "C-can I play?" I studdered "No way Slowkit this game is for kits who knowo to be real warriors" Black-kit growled in my face "But I can be a good warrior!" I protested "Yeah right. And dogs will fly" Silverk sneered, the other kits purred in laughter "I thought we were siblings" I stammered keeping back tears "Ha! In your silly dreams Slowkit were perfect and your paw is twisted your nothing but a burden" Black-kit hissed "Fine you over grown tick!" I hissed in anger "Mom! Hawk-kit called me a over grown tick!" He whined "Did she now?" Snowfall hissed glaring at me "he started it!" I meowed "No it was Hawk-kit" Silverkit said Snowfall turned to the other kits who nodded "Hawk-kit I have half the mind to call your father" The white queen hissed "But-" I started "No. You aren't allowed out of the nursery for the rest of today and all of tomorrow unless your getting freshkil l for us" Snowfall growled I glared at my siblings snickering faces "Mothe-" I was cut off again "Silence!!" Snowfall roared and shoved me into my nest which I had by my self. And she stomped out of the nursery "Are you okay?" A soft honey like voice asked me I looked up to see a pretty silver she-cat "Yes I'm okay Crystalheart" I purred "Hawk-kit!!!"a loud yowl came from the clearing "That's Lionfoot.. I guess i have to go" I meowed and limped out of the den "Yes?" I meowed softly at my father "What's this I hear about you calling Black-kit a name?" He growled "he said I don't know how to be a real warrior " I growled back "Maybe you don't because real warriors don't call their denmates names!" Lionfoot snapped "I'll be the best warrior! You'll see!" I screeched "Doupt it" he said and padded towards the nursery and Black-kit came running towards him purring 'They'll see how great of a warrior I can be!' I thought unsheathing my claws then I felt a cat shove past me "Watch it kit!" Quillfeathers annoyed hissed came from above me "Sorry" I muttered and padded away.

One moon later;

I woke up to a paw poking me in the side "Wha..?" I muttered I looked up to see a white kit and a gray one "Hey sleepy paws" "Come one Frostkit I was too close to getting a mouse" I whined softly "Come on. Let's go outside" he meowed "sure" I padded (or more so wobbled) out of the den with him "I saw my siblings pastering Talonstar asking to go out to the forest 'If I was leader I wouldn't even make them honorable elders' I snorted in my head "I can't believe them" I hissed to my friends "What?" Rainkit asked "My siblings and Shadedkit their so rude!" I meowed ,"Well maybe they changed today" Rainkit said softly I snorted in reply "Hello Caboosekit " a soft hissed sound behind me I wirled around and came nose to nose with Silverkit I growled "Hey me and the other kits thought we got off on the wrong paw so we wanted to start off again. So what do you say" Silverkit meowed eyes narrowed slightly "Well... Uh okay.. I guess" I said slightly taken aback "she said yes! Oh and Talonstar said we could leave camp but as long as we stay close to our border" Black-kit came running towards them with Shadedkit "Let's go before were seen!" He hissed quietly

I thought we were-' Frostkit interrupted my thoughts "Come on!" He called and dashed after the other kits I followed trying to run. "Hey let's catch some prey! The first one with a mouse wins!" Frostkit said and dashed away with the other kits. I sigh and sniffed around and caught mouse 'Ha take that Black-kit while you've been playing I've been practicing!' I thought I got down in a hunters crouch and stalked forward silently I saw the mouse then I leapted and caught it in my claws and killed it. I bought it to the spot we were going to meet up at. I wait until I heard the other kits "I already know who's going to lose" Black-kits sneer made me want to purred "Hello" I said and looked at the mouse near my paws "How?" Black-kit said but quickly regained himself and Sat down.

"Hey you guys wanna hunt a badger?" Black-kit said "Yeah!" I squealed excitedly with Rainkit "Here's a tuft of its fur" Silverkit meowed and pushed a nasty smelling piece of fur to us "It's easy it's the size of a mouse" Black-kit added I nodded and padded away easily scenting it "Over here!" I called and followed it but a low menacing growl step us in our tracks we all turned slowly behind and gasped in pure horror, a giant black and white creature was towering over us "Run!!" Frostkit screeched and ran I dashed away following him fear giving me speed I ran a different way and turned to follow camp then I noticed the badger was following me! I ran faster but my lame paw snaged on a root and I tumbled over I fell and I saw the badger above me, the last thing I saw was Black-kit smiling at me from above then the world went black

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