Criticism Unicorn

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(I'm thinking about changing her name  , if you think I should name her to something else just comment. :))

Luke's pov

" So is the whore coming to the party or what? "

Arzaylea , asked Michael looking him straight in his eyes

He lowered his head down looking at the ground.

Arzaylea groaned as she rolled her eyes at Michael.

" What the hell Clifford , I believe I told you and the rest of you guys to do this for me ? "

I was hiding behind the bleachers ease dropping on their conversation.

They never tell me anything because I'm the "baby" of the group , ugh whatever.

" look I'm sorry we didn't even see her today I saw her sister , me and the guys saw her sister today but that's it."

Michael tried to defend himself and the rest of the guys.

I was so confused who were they talking about?

" Well.. Who is this sister everyone keeps talking about is she new?"

Azaylea , said coming closer to Michael in a intimidating way.

I wanted to hear a little more about this person , but I took a quick glance at someone only to realize it was Lilac ,

She was walking with her two friends before I knew it I started walking from under the bleachers completely forgetting Arzaylea and Michaels are standing on top of the bleachers.

I started walking from under the bleachers.

" Where are you going Lucas? "

Azaylea , asked curiously in a nosy way.

" My name is not Lucas it's just Luke , where I'm going is none of your damn business alright so go choke on a big one."

I snapped , I proudly walked off as Azaylea gasps at my words I can tell her face was beyond red.

I began to hide behind some of the cars , I thought to myself before I continued to follow her.

" No Luke you are not going to do this if she finds out you stalk her she'd never wanna date you although I need to know how to get to her house anyways , wait no stop Luke." 

I thinking in my head but then I heard one of her friends say my name so I said fuck it.

I continued to follow after her , you can tell I never did anything like this before.

After a while she was stepping on her front porch , which I assume is her house.

I took that as my opportunity to continue more of my stalking.

" Damnit Luke, "

I crossed the street quickly , I went around the back I began peaking my head out I notice there was a couple spooning  , it was Melanie and some guy on a kitchen table spooning.

I started getting grossed out.

I was about turn around and leave but then Lilac walked in shouting at them one thing lead to another next thing I know Arísana is backed up into a corner.

My blood started to boil I tried to contain myself.

I was just watching Lilac get mistreated by this asshole but then a light blub lit up in my head.

            Few minutes later

Alex was coming out of Arísana's
home I took a picture of his  license plate.

He stepped outside walking out to his motorcycle,

" So you wanna put your hands on a female? Okay you have a rude awakening coming straight for you...

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