First person POV

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Have you ever been reading a story in the first person POV... And it's just...?

???

'i looked at my brother. I noticed he seemed sad so I hugged him. I am in love with him.'

Like it begins with 'I' most of the time. They also add 'real feelings' aka feelings and thoughts no one ever had or felt.

First person is great when it's the right kind of story. If it's a piece of shit that you scraped off the road and threw on your phone or computer, then stop.

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