First off, I just want to thank everyone so so much for dealing with my worries in the last part, and giving some suggestions. I have made some minor changes, and some more major ones as well. So without further ado, here is my updated puppet contest entry.
I do believe that it is a bit of an improvement, but certainly not perfect. I added tension marks on the jacket, especially on the arm that the string is breaking on. I also opened Sans' jacket up, and gave him more lines on his face for a more struggled effect. I added the spheres to lighten the room and increase the contrast and visual interest of the room and the puppeteer's hand. I then added shine marks on the smooth tile floor, which allowed Sans' shadow to stand out better, and then shimmers on the windows as well to give the appearance of glass and the fraction of light though that stained glass.
So, yeah, not perfect, but, I think, and hope that it's an improvement. Please, please, please, please, please, tell me what you think, and what can be approved upon, yes, I think it looks better, but I'm still worried, and want to do my best, so a helping hand would be greatly appreciated, thanks for dealing with so much of my annoying concerns, it means a lot to me, so thank you all so much for your understanding.
Again, just comment any suggestions, thank you so, so much!
So, tell me what ya think in the comments section below, and if ya like, click on the little shining star too! See ya later my Spirit Pack!
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