My Prince by Alyloony

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NOTE: I HAVEN’T READ THE PUBLISHED BOOK SO THIS REVIEW IS BASED ON THE WATTPAD STORY

AND SINCE THIS STORY IS WRITTEN IN TAGALOG/FILIPINO I WILL ALSO USE THE SAME LANGUAGE FOR MY BOOK REVIEW

Arcie tried her best to enter Prince Academy, the school for elites in spite of being a commoner just to follow her first love. But after she succeed entering the school, she realized how far is the distance between him and the guy she loves and how it is impossible for them to be together. Being a commoner, she was always being bullied by her classmates and doesn't have any friends. So she decided to stay in shadows until she graduates. But when her last year in Prince Academy came, she became involve in six people which they called them selves Star Six, that made her final year turned upside down.

-          How well it is written? – 3/5

 The way Alyloony wrote the story, para lang siyang nagkukwento and I guess that’s what most reader wants specially in the Wattpad world. Madami ang nakagusto ng pagsusulat dahil ang atake ng story ay mga normal na sinasabi ng mga tao (or I myself) sa mga normal na buhay (ex: OMG, ohmygolly) but the said statements are just an example. Another thing, sobrang dami ng kinukwento sa story na hindi mo na alam kung sino ba talaga ang pinofocus. My Prince supposedly will be the story about Arcie and his prince pero sobrang dami ng Segway na nagpapagulo sa story and nagpapa-inconsistent sa title.

-          Plot – 2/5

Yes, madaming kilig moments but let’s face it CLICHÉ. Yun ang kadalasan problema ng mga author, ang iwasang maging cliché ng story nila, but in this story sobrang dami to the point na mapepredict mo na almost lahat ng mangyayari.

-          Character – 4/5

About the characters, maganda ang pagkaka-describe ni Alyloony sa mga ito. Each person ay sumasalamin sa mga individual na nagbabasa nito na mas madaling naka-attract sa mga mambabasa na nagging dahilan para magustuhan or maisipang basahin o tapusin ang kuwento.

-          Description – 3/5

Again, the description is too cliché, a commoner being involved with an elite. Unrequited love. Poor maiinlove sa mayaman or vice versa. Paulit ulit na. The only thing na makakapagpabasa sayo ng story is the word Star Six na parang mapapaisip ka, ano kaya yun. But I repeat that’s it only.

Overall Rating: 3/5

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