The Shadow and The Sand ( Gaara love story)

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Well I'm going to start this story off by giving some character information alright? alright! :D

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Name: Yoru U~oka (means Night Walker)

Age: 16

Rank: Battle General

Village: The Village Hidden in the Shadows

Personality: Yoru is a tough, strong willed girl. Even though she is a bit socially awkward, she knows how to make friends easily. She is a naturally serious person and is often mistaken to be angry or mean by others. But in reality she is a fun hyper girl that can be pretty immature. But once in battle she turns into a cold blooded killer. She's known to not let an enemy leave a battle alive or with out seriously injuring them. She's kind of hard to get along with because of her crude sarcastic remarks but once you get on her good side she will do everything she can to protect the ones she loves.

Friends: Yoshino the Kage for the village (age 18)

Kai and Sai the twins of the shadow. (age 17) and also yours best friends

Hyosuke (16

Yoshitsune (18.)

(Pictures of all the characters should be in my latest chapter)

Likes: Black, the night, her friends, attractive people, eating, hanging out with friends, music,singing, cats, people

Dislikes: people, onions, the heat, the cold, people who mess with her friends, Taira, people who interrupt her thoughts, people who pull out her earphones

Appearance: Yoru has dark brown hair that just passes her shoulders. She has dark brown eyes that turn a bright red and her pupil turns into a slit. Like a cats eye, but red. She is also tanned. She is not a perfect girl. She has scars along her body. Many on her wrist for when she tried to commit suicide, and many from missions. She usually wears a black shirt, red and black checkered skinny jeans, and studded boots. (pretty much punk rock)

Demon: Yoru has a shadow Kimera sealed inside her. (Picture In chapter 5)

Abilities: Because of her demon Yoru has the ability to control shadows like how Gaara can control his sand.

Kekki Genkai: Shadouai or Shadow Eye. This is the ability that Yoru has. when her eyes go all cats eye, just by looking into her opponents eyes or just by simply touching them she is able to learn everything about that person. And with this information she can use it to mentally torture her enemy. She tells them every bad thing they've done in their life's till they basically go insane. And when they do, she starts to put pressure on their brain making their heads implode.

Weapons: Tamashī no ken or Soul Sword. This is a large sword that Yoru carries on her back. It isn't visible until she pulls it out which surprises enemy's because they don't expect her to have such a large sword that they couldn't see. You see when the sword is in it's holster it turns invisible, but when taken out it turns visible. The reason it is called the Soul Sword is because when Yoru kills someone with it the sword absorbs the persons soul in a jewel located where the sword meets the handle. When position a certain way you can see the faces of the people that have died by the sword still screaming for mercy.

Background: Yoru had a rough childhood. Like Gaara she was targeted by the Kage because she had gotten to powerful. And because of that she believed that the entire world was against her. She killed who ever she wanted for anything that made her upset about them. After she turned 14 she met Kai and Sai, for some reason they intrigued her. When she tried to talk with them they asked her to tell them which one was which. Which was proven difficult for Yoru because they were identical. They both had blond hair that hung around their green eyes. They wore the exact same thing. After a couple weeks of trying to tell them apart they all became close friends.

After that they were in their own little world. To them it was them and everything else. That's when they met Hyosuke , they were walking around the village and Hyosuke accidentally bumped into Sai knocking him down. Kai was just about to beat him up for dropping his brother till he was stopped by Yoru who told them to stop because, like them, Hyosuke was alone in the world. It took the twins a little longer to get used to having Hyosuke in their world but they soon got over it and let him in.

Than that's when they all met Yoshitsune and Yoshino. They all barely came into the village and had asked Yoru for directions to the Kage tower. And that's when Yoru was attacked by some assassins sent by the KuroKage. Yoshino managed to protect Yoru from the ninjas and get them away to safety. He asked Yoru why they tried attacking her and she told them it's because of the demon that was sealed inside her. She thought that they would have both run away from her and call her a monster like the other villagers but they both surprised her when they both hugged her, and told her that they'll protect their new found friend. And that's when her world started to expand.

After having new found friends Yoru changed her killer ways. She started to become a ninja that the village would be proud of. And because of that over the years the villagers started to accept her back and stopped to exclude her. But of course their are still some people that won't let the past go and continue to ridicule her, only to be stopped by Yoshitsune.

After the death of the KuroKage did most of the assassination attempts stop, but the elders of the village continued to try and kill her. But because the KuroKage had to be the strongest of the village, by 15 Yoru was elected to be the next Kage. She turned down the position because she would rather be out in the field fighting to protect her village than to be stuck in a office doing paperwork all day. And since she turned it down she suggested to have Yoshino be the the next KuroKage because, even though he is a bit immature, he has a very strong sense of responsibility and would be a great Kage and of course Yoru was right. Even though some people thought Yoshino wouldn't have made it through. But boy did he prove them wrong. Now many people look up to him because of how a great leader he is.

After a couple months of nobody targeting Yoru she was attacked by a ninja who after almost being killed by Yoru, admitted that the village elders paid him to try to kill her. After Yoru told Yoshino he went straight to the elders and fired them all. Making Kai, Sai, Hyosuke, Yoshitsune, Yoru, and himself the new decision making council.

Now to the present. Yoru is assigned on a mission by Yoshino who wouldn't give her any details about the mission. well I guess let's see how that goes.

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so what do you guys think? this is my first story and I'm wondering if I should continue or not. tell me if it's good or just plain boring. give me feed back please! :) and fair wins everybody.