The Gangleader's Girl

THINGS THAT I'VE MESSED UP ON TGLG

1. I never really said where they lived or what school they go to and what not.

2. If you remember when in one of the chapters their teacher talked about "a project and getting their partners later" yeah well that was supposed to be like Mary and idk Gunner or someone else and them learning about Mary and they share it to the class, but then I realised "Who would share something personal like her getting raped and beaten in front of a class??" So I dropped the idea.

3. I really messed up the chemistry between Jash and Mary. Like I made it cheesy. They just both fell in love with eachother out of nowhere.

4. Remember when Mary like loved mac n' cheese and then she hated it as she got older? I never explained that, I was supposed to but never had the right moment to. The reason is that her mom and dad would make her macaroni and cheese and then her aunty and her mom died. So when she moved to America, she was always reminded of them when she ate it.

5. The chapters were like long for the first few chapters. They were about 1,500-2,200 and then they got shorter. The reason why is because I didn't want this story to be like 16 chapters so I made the chapters shorter, I think I still nailed it. Some what did.

6. I'm not sure but I have to edit this story anyways, but both Mary's parents were orignally going to be alive and I was just going to have it as they abandoned her. But then I thought about how they should love her and yeah all that happened.

7. I never really did anyone else's POV. Only Mary and Jash, like two chapters of Travis and one of Gunner. I tried doing other POV's with the other characters, but idk they just never worked out.

8. Didn't talk about Jash's parents or sister. They just came out of nowhere.

9. Okay I know you people probably hate this story because of the character description. A british teen with dark red hair, an asian teen that looks like a kpop singer, an irish teen that doesn't look irish, an american, a bad boy who's name is Jash, and the rest are normal. Look I know how I made the characters look like, I was a beginner when making this story.

10. I kind of gave up on this story. Almost every chapter I put in description on their clothes and what they looked like but I gave up on that. I felt like it made the story boring in a way and that you guys just want to read some romance and action.

11. I never explained Mary's drinking problem, I might soon in a side chapter but if not then I'm sorry.

12. Jash has no tattoos. How are you a bad boy/gang leader and you have no tattoos. Unless if that's just a stereotype.

13. Never explained how Mary learned how to fight.

14. Everyone secretly had a crush on eachother (besides Connor) and fell inlove. Don't worry I'm going to be creating side chapters for everyone.

15. There was originally going to be a lot more chapters, I had a bunch of ideas for this story. But the more that I kept writing, the more that the setting changed and I couldn't add the ideas. Like I was going to have Mary already met Ryan but that never happened. I was going to add a chapter (which will be a side chapter) when Mary is training. But oh well. No going back now.