Hey so this is where I will start to write comments and such at the beginning. :D
Okay so I re-checked this chapter because there was errors and I think I got them all.
Readers are starting to get confused with the whole 'unknown pov' thing. I don't put an 'unknown pov' without giving a name in the end. At the end of the chapter you will find out whose mind this is.
Thanks for the feedback! :)
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c h a p t e r . t w o
unknown . pov
Long ago, when I was in utter chaos. Every time someone saw me deeper; that someone changed in a flick into a savage beast with blood curdled eyes, sharp long teeth, death grabbing claws and rough black skin. They tried to kill me without mercy. All I could do was defend myself, fight back, end a good soul. The upsetting thing was that I had no idea why they just transformed into this unrealistic creature and set out murder thinking it was the right thing to do.
I was born an individual - a rogue. Given a young female pet Border Collie and blessed her Lexie. She has been my companion for nineteen years, guarding me like a giant sentinel against the devils.
At the end of this madness, my whole crimson red surroundings turned to caliginous which made me believe it was a sign of somewhat hope even though it was a sad colour and environment. Throughout my dismal days of traveling, hunting and training, the demons had settled down, there was no more making barbaric moves on me - that made me think why had it all suddenly faded away, why now? I had lived my years fighting these menacing monsters and yet they have finally, possible walked away?
One brilliant day with Lexie when I truly believed freedom was mine however, the next thing happened - the sky flushed rapidly into a dark black blue. It shattered into crumbling pieces and molded itself into a whirling black hole - sucking in everything it could.
I don't know how but it felt like the wind itself wrapped its invisible fingers around my waist and yanked me and Lexie up into the strong mid air; the only action I could do was scream and scream for the best possible. Lexie herself yelped and barked.The power of it was extremely strong, beyond my little strength against it.
I took the last gaze at the entrance at this unforgiving gate to something I thought was going to be hell.
Before I thought of taking a last look back I was already in this strange untouchable pathway where my body floated endlessly. The silence pierced my ears because it looked like by the movements of this gigantic golden tunnel of jagged loops turning anti-clock wise suggested it should be making a lot of noise.
Odd moments passed of floating forward in this massive bright coil, an abrupt god-like voice bellowed forth and said out loud,
"Who're you?! How did you get in here?! Speak your purpose!"
I panicked, shaking my head about with my wide eyes searching for the face of the voice - my hair followed in delay.
"Speak or I will send you to The Hall!"
Guessing by the choice of 'or' I spoke up, yelling in slight anger and fear, "I don't know! You tell me! You put me in here! Swallowed me up! You scum! You did this! You hear?!"
This unpleasant unreal character revealed himself - immense crystal white eyes gazed at me; the presence made me very uneasy. He was at the end or start of this wrapped place, filling the space of the bright shimmering end of the golden tunnel I floated with.
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