Thank You

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Thank You

By @themeentalist, Chile

The team is watching a dead girl in the empty cellar on the parking lot of the building, forensics says she was pulled in there and that she died from lack of oxygen, there are no signs of struggle so it was probably someone she knew; he or she set her up and let her die.

‘Poor fellow’ Fischer says as she refers to the dead corpse

‘How many days did the forensic said she was trapped in here?’ Abbott asks

’16 hours, reports says she died from lack of oxygen´ Lisbon answer, smiling to myself when she sees the surprised expression In Abbotts face, why do people surprise themselves when someone read a case file? Isn’t that what this job is about?

‘Thank you’ he just replies, she hear Jane’s chuckle coming from behind, Lisbon turns around to see him… late as always.

‘Had a nice tea?’ she asks him sassily, she can notice a little smirk in Cho’s face, he has done that a lot lately, that makes her happy.

‘Yeah, thank you… I brought you a coffee; it’s in the car if you want it.’ Jane smiles at her.

‘No, no thanks’ she says struggling with myself, it will be too unprofessional to go and get the coffee, plus the look Fischer is sending Lisbon right now is scaring the crap out of her.

‘Is there any coffee for us?’ she finally asks.

‘I’m going to bring it anyways’ Jane replies to Lisbon, paying no attention to Fischers question and then running back to his car.

‘you know he is not gonna get the coffee.. he is planning something’ Lisbon warns her.

‘go’ she just orders Lisbon, she nod at her and exits with fast steps trying to reach Jane.

‘Jane!’ Lisbon shouts at him when he finally comes to her view.

‘Lisbon!!!!’ he shouts back imitating her.

‘ha, ha… very funny…’ Lisbon says, approaching to him.

‘Want your coffee huh?’

‘we both know you didn’t brought any coffee’ she replies.

‘what will make you believe that?’ Jane asks raising an eyebrow.

‘cause you are to lazy to go to the car twice.. you would have bring it with you in the first place’

‘you are a fast learner my dear’  He smiles at her.

‘So? Where are we going?’ she asks following him.

‘You are not that fast… hmm’ He mumbles.

‘so?’

‘I really need to tell you?’ Jane says complaining like a 3 year old.

‘yes please’ Lisbon responds

‘I already know who the killer is’ Jane says narrowing his eyes as if it was something obvious.

I stop in my tracks, he can’t possibly know already who the killer is, he hasn’t even looked clearly at the girl.

‘No.. No you don’t, you are just messing with me..’Lisbon says, he stops and look serious at her..

‘Why in the world will I be messing with you with that? There are thousands of other choices, I wouldn’t pick that one, killing someone it’s not a joke Lisbon’ He says with his typical voice, a little more serious than normal.

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⏰ Last updated: Oct 06, 2014 ⏰

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