Shadow of Doubt is a story by @x-indieblossom-x. I read the first part before writing this part here and I have to say that it sounds very intriguing!
"in a world where kings and queens rule, kingdoms of elements coexist. but sometimes, the peace is broken, and chaos erupts. an unlikely romance occurs and one's choices can have consequences, huge consequences."
So, pretty head on. I know I'm certainly going to go read their story! Just give suggestions and pointers, what you like, all that good stuff. Add comments here or just on the story!
At first glance, the one thing I'd suggest is to watch your capitalization. It's a basic part of grammar and it can make it look a lot more professional-like if you do, if that's what you're going for.
I totally don't pretend I know everything that needs to be capitalized, ha. *cue nervous laughter* In all seriousness though, capitalizing can be tricky sometimes.
English, why?
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