A Debt Unpaid

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Please comment in every chapter, tell me what you think, and tell me your opinion about the story.

This is my first novel written, and my first co-write, so please be a bit forgiving on criticizing me :)

This story was created by Rein and I. I was convinced to complete the story and that he would help me with it.... So if you would read the story, you'll realize there are two main characters, and our two different styles of writing....

So, Please Don't Judge (that harshly)!

and, I hope u enjoy! :D

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